Riley-F

In "Panic Bird" the speaker feels like panic is this dark, evil bird that flys into you. The speaker also feals like the bird is biting and eating your insides. The bird is also lifting it's wings and screaching. The speaker also feels like the bird is nesting and leaving this dark black slime and foul breath. Then the bird just leaves and is preying on the speaker. THat is how the speaker feels.

‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍Riley ‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍ Funk 1-11-12 group a

I think the author included that paragrapth to show how dangerous the storm is. I think it shows that because it said there was dead ‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍bodys ‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍. The storm they are in was similar to one her grandfather was in.

Riley Funk 1-25-12

Chuck is very ‍‍‍‍helpful ‍‍‍‍to the people around him. He says " I found a calf"‍ wich is helpful because it give the group food ‍. He goes out and finds food instead of staying behind. He risked his own life to give the kids food. He thinks he is going to leave but every time he does he comes back with good news of something he found. One of the things he does is says ,"im leaving". He just comes back with news that he found a calf.

Riley Funk 2-1-12

Manuel is the dynamic charectar. When the story started he was scared or fearful of the tallent show. He was scared that something would go wrong or he would not do well. At the end he was glad he did it even when he was about to cry.

=REWRITING TONE=


 * =Mr. Cook's Example= || =Student Example= ||
 * //Paragraph//

I __deeply resent__ our city council’s granting permission for the development of fifty condominiums along Canyon Drive. The plain truth is, __the plan stinks__! Most residents of Canyon Drive are people like me who moved here years ago. We were attracted by the peace of the location. Now, for __no good reason__, we __have been betrayed__ by our elected officials. We face the __nightmare__ of listening to the __racket of construction work around the clock__ and of seeing our lovely neighborhood turned into heaven knows what. The prospect __makes me sick__. It is __maddening__ that the city council, in one __careless decision__, can __destroy__ the lifestyles that we have worked so hard to achieve. I urge all members of this community to sign a petition forcing the city council to reverse their decision. Failing that, we should __vote the bums out of office__!


 * TONE**: The speaker’s/author’s attitude about the city council’s decision on development was //frustrated, angry, disgruntled, aggravated// ||

The author makes Hugh and his mother seem real because they do what real kids and mothers do. When she told him to come in he did no sat ,"yes mom, coming" he said not yet. When he said that she didn't say,"okay i'll ask you later" she said ,"now!" I can infer that Hough is like most kids and argues about coming in. That is how the charectars are so realistic.

Riley F. Exercise C

If I were Maibon I would wish for a pet that I would not have to take care of and it did every thing it self. I would have to pay no heed to it because it did every thing for it self. People would stop and gape at it because they have never seen such a thing. I would want him to look frail but stong and laden with hair. I want him to have so much hair he could barely see. He could talk and have a nasty attitude and I would retort so he does not feel like he is better than me.

4/11/12 Doc Rabbit is the trickster in this story because he was tricking Bruh Fox. Doc Rabbit was tricking him by going "whooo-hooo,whooo-hooo" and Bruh Fox would get scared. Bruh Fox also got tricked in to letting Doc Rabbit drink all the cream. Bruh Fox found out and was going to throw him into the fire but Doc Rabbit tricked Bruh Fox into throwing him into his home. I can infer that Doc Rabbit is clever because he tricked Bruh Fox so many times.