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The Boy Who Lived with the Bears

The boy parents dies so he moves with his uncle. His uncle resented him. He treated him badly, he dresses him in ragged clothes, he gives him scraps of food. The boy tries everything to please his uncle. The boy uncle wanted to get rid of him so he took him hunting and told the boy he was a dog. The boy thought something was strange because them were going hunting where people usually go hunting near the north. The uncle told his nephew that there was animals in the cave then he said your my dog go chase them out. Then his uncle trapped him in a cave. Then the boy realizes he was meant to be left there. He sings a song and, then the bears lift the boulder. He could choose what animal he wanted to be with so he chose the bears and they accepted him as their very own. Then his uncle came back but the boy stands up for his new family. Then his uncle apoligize because he regrets doing what he did. Then the boy and uncle become a family again and, the bears become part of it.

The Panic Bird BCR January 3, 2012 Panic can make u feel frustrated. It make you feel frustrated because in the poem it say things in a mean and vicious way like it say's " If I saw it coming i'd fend it off with machete or a base ball bat. It describes how the person is saying it. It is violent because it also says that i fill with black blood tells how it make its kill and tells explain things that shows its anger.

Anthony Harris January5 By Mr. Tunechi Love

A Love That Will Stay I will walk with you without going astray Even if hardships ahead they lay I will give you a loving hug everyday No matter whether the sky is sunny gray I will shield you when harm comes your way You must not be hurt come what may I will make your days happy and gay For your fears I will try to allay I will remember the days to buy you a boquet Till I'm old in my memory is in disarray I now only have this to convey That I love you and my love is here to stay.

Winter Thunder Anthony Harris 1/12/12

He/She included the paragraph because he/she is telling you dont seperate because you might not survive. If you seperate and something goes wrong nobody's going to be there to help you. He/She also included it because the storm is very dangerous and when it say's " Don't stop moving until you find shelter". It means that if you probably stop as strong as the Blizzard is it could put alot of pressure on your body and you could freeze, die, or get blown away from your pack.

‍‍‍‍‍‍Olive First, Olive say's "that nobody could touch her food because it's only for her and nobody else because she is selfish. Second, she talks about Maggie clothing and she thinks she is better than everybody wlse because her parents have money. Finnally, she thinks her dad will come and save her in the middle of the blizzard. The character trait i put for Olive is selfish. ‍‍‍‍‍‍

Manuel is the dynamic character. He is the dynamic character because he changes the most he was nervous or wooried at the beginning of the story. He joined so he could impress the girls. Then we got on the stage for the talent show he was stagefrightened. Lastly as the song began to play he pantomine the song and everyone cheered in the audience. Then he became confident.

=REWRITING TONE=

I __deeply resent__ our city council’s granting permission for the development of fifty condominiums along Canyon Drive. The plain truth is, __the plan stinks__! Most residents of Canyon Drive are people like me who moved here years ago. We were attracted by the peace of the location. Now, for __no good reason__, we __have been betrayed__ by our elected officials. We face the __nightmare__ of listening to the __racket of construction work around the clock__ and of seeing our lovely neighborhood turned into heaven knows what. The prospect __makes me sick__. It is __maddening__ that the city council, in one __careless decision__, can __destroy__ the lifestyles that we have worked so hard to achieve. I urge all members of this community to sign a petition forcing the city council to reverse their decision. Fa iling that, we should __vote the bums out of office__! I deeply admire our city council's granting permission for the development of fifty condominiums along Canyon Drive. The plain truth is the plan is doubtful! Most residents of Canyon drive are people like me who moved here years ago. We were attracted by the peace of the location. Now for a good reason we disagree, we have been neglected by our elected officials. We face the darkness of listening tot the disturbance of construction work around thye clock and of seeing our lovely neighborhood turned into a gangsta territory. Go suck eggs and leave you bums.
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 * TONE**: The speaker’s/author’s attitude about the city council’s decision on development was //frustrated, angry, disgruntled, aggravated// ||

The author makes Hugh and his mother seem plausible/ or like mother and son because he gives them human actions. When mom says "Hugh right this minute"! its's what my mom tells me. It's just like real people because parents tell their kids the same thing. They yell at their kids for disobeying. Hugh plays in the sand and little kids play in the sand. Hugh uses binoculars and some people uses binoculars to but fro different reasons. Just like most kids Hugh's obeys. I know thats it's plausible because in real life when a mother say something the first time some children listen because they know that their parents mean buisness.

If I was Maibon I would wish for any machine that could help us with anything. I would like this wish so people wouldn't be frail, and it wouldn't cause a plight. Then, everybody would heed to the invention. All people have to do is tell the machine to do something and the will do it and make a gape at the machine. Also, nobody will be vainly. The machine could also help you when you are laden so you won't struggle and you can get your work down.

The trickster I pick is Doc Rabbit. I pick him because he tricked Bruh Fox throughout the hold story.In the story he pretends that someone is calling him, he did it so he could eat/drink some of Bruh Fox bubbly brook. He makes the noise whoo hooo, whooo,hooo. Doc Rabbit is chicanery towards Bruh Fox. At the end of the story he pretends that he do want to be thrown in the fire by Bruh Fox but he didn't do is because Doc Rabbit wanted it. Lastly, bruh Fox said that he was going to throw Doc Rabbit in the briar patch and he pretended that so he could get thrown in there because he was born there. Bruh Fox threw him in there. Bruh Fox is very gullible.