Sabrina-R


 * The Boy who lived With the Bears**

In a village lived a boy and his uncle. The boy's parents died and his uncle was supposed to take care of him. The boy was very good to his uncle, but his uncle wasn't nice to him at all. One day the uncle had an idea, so they went hunting together that day. His uncle trapped the boy in a small cave and left him there to die. Then, animals throughout the forest came to the cave and let the boy out. The boy told the animals his story and the animals said "pick any of us, we will adopt you". So, the boy chose the bears and they adopted him and raised him as one of their own. As time pasted his uncle visited the forest again to hunt a bear. The uncle chased the bears and then the boy stood up to his uncle and said "leave my family alone". His uncle apologized for everything he had done and the boy forgave him. After that day the boy was never neglected again.

The lesson you learn from this story is you should never abandon or mistreat your children, you should only love, care and respect your children even if you don't want too.


 * Sabrina's Riddle**

‍‍‍‍‍‍In the light I cannot be seen, But, in the dark or light I glow constantly, I have no mouth but, I can breathe, I am a myth in books that people can read, and in the dark people try to find me, Trace my steps and you will find me and if you want, redesign me. ‍‍‍‍‍‍

The speaker feels Terified about panic because the auther said "It thrusts it 's clanking beak into my liver." This is very serious so the reader or speaker should feel very worried or frightened. Another reson it is a very serious is when the auther said "my guts, my hreat, rips off strips." What it means by this is somthing is eatting a cropse leaveing debre. This tells the reader the body was eaten by a vulture. I know that the reader feels terified because a vulture is killing a animal of some kind. This is terifing because the vulture killed a animal and the fact the vulture killed the animal makes the reader or speaker very worried or terified.
 * Homework**
 * "Panic Bird" BCR 1-3-12**

‍‍‍‍The charter trait I picked for chuck is resoruseful because chuck has the abilety to survive with the things around him. He shows examples like when he got some wood for fire or found a willow tree for shelter. He told him and he knew if he went to try to go get help they could propbaly make it out of the storm. But, instead he found a frozen calf of meat with helped the childern because they were running out of food. All these examples show Chuck is really resourful and can be a big help to the children and the teacher ‍‍‍‍.
 * Sabrina Ruths**
 * 1-26-12**

I'm hot, But once and awhile I'm ice, I can go more than 24 miles an hour, is it a __blizzard__ ? -Caitlin :) And I never take a shower, Somtimes you can't see me, But I am always there belive me
 * Sabrina's Riddle**
 * 2-1-12**

‍‍‍A rainbow of colors fly by, All mixed up andwatched by all eyes, It's like a butieful decorated pie, As they all fly under the moonlight sky, Hundreds to thousands as they travel togather, Making a 2,00 vagyage inany type of weather
 * Sabrina Riddle**

‍‍‍ For: Mr.cook

Ideas for Riddles: __*somthing to do with rainbows__ __*__ __*__ __*__ (Others can add Ideas)

=REWRITING TONE=


 * =Mr. Cook's Example= || =Student Example= ||
 * //Paragraph//

I __deeply resent__ our city council’s granting permission for the development of fifty condominiums along Canyon Drive. The plain truth is, __the plan stinks__! Most residents of Canyon Drive are people like me who moved here years ago. We were attracted by the peace of the location. Now, for __no good reason__, we __have been betrayed__ by our elected officials. We face the __nightmare__ of listening to the __racket of construction work around the clock__ and of seeing our lovely neighborhood turned into heaven knows what. The prospect __makes me sick__. It is __maddening__ that the city council, in one __careless decision__, can __destroy__ the lifestyles that we have worked so hard to achieve. I urge all members of this community to sign a petition forcing the city council to reverse their decision. Failing that, we should __vote the bums out of office__!


 * TONE**: The speaker’s/author’s attitude about the city council’s decision on development was //frustrated, angry, disgruntled, aggravated//

//BCR revision// //The author makes the story seem plausible because he uses fights that might of actually happened, or like realistic fiction. He also shows the actions that a young boy might have had in World War II. For example, he was being cautious because Hugh thought he saw a german submarine periscope in the water. Since the author uses real life actions or thoughts this makes the story seem real or realistic fiction. I think not only the actions, thoughts or words made the story seem real but the setting and time frame in the story helped the reader make the story seem more plausble.//

//Formative Assessment// //Doc Rabbit shows humour by doing things like making nioses. In rthe beggning of the story Doc rabbit goes Whoo-ahhh. this scares bruh fox.Another example of humour was when he got stuck in tar baby and he said "Well I still have my head left. I'm really mad now!" Then he gets his feet, hands, and head stuck in the tar baby.When bruh finds him in the tar baby, Doc Rabbit uses reverse phscology tomake bruh fox throwhim in the brair patch, a place he grew up. so he could escape bruh fox.Hefinnaly teases bruh fox and runs away which also shows homour.// ||